Today we were looking at each others blogs and getting feedback from what others thought. Lucy looked at Amour News' blog and she thought that the layout was appealing and simple yet effective for their target audience. They are looking at how social media has influenced young girls with the use of make-up and we felt their website is appealing to young people.
For our own website, Zoe looked at it and gave us feedback. She said she liked the gifs which are appealing to young people and something they can relate to. She also thought that our news topic was interesting and relevant where people can spread the word of our news package through our social media links and blog. To improve she said that we could make the 'About' page more personal to student life.
For our own opening sequence, Amy looked at it and gave us feedback. She said she thought the music was effective, and worked well with the edited graphics. She also thought it was relevant to our target audience to get an idea of different aspects of university life. However, she said there could be a few more shots to make sequence more engaging.